some good stuff!! (finally) :D

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enough is enough! i've been depressed long enough! and after a bunch of depressing and "emo" journals, i'm here with good news!! :D i'm really loving my job, sure its tiring but its also awesome, all my co-workers are epic and- one of them is crazy in love with me!!!!!!!!!!!! and i was all like "hey, are you even normal?" XDD....... and we went out once.... but whatever... tbis is not a diary so i gotta shut up now XD :la:

just cause this journal is short, i want to end it with a....... MEEEEMEEEE!!!

its one of "is your oc a mary sue" stuff... so i did for my trio archie (A) kate (k) and casey (c)

....A   K   C
1. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are possessed by an angel.
2. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are possessed by a demon.
3. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
4. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are physically strong.
5. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour.
6. [] [ ] [ ]Their eyes are an unusual color.
7. [] [ ] [ ] This eye color happens to be red.
8. [ ] [ ] [ ] Their eyes change color.
9. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have wings.
10. [ ] [ ] [ ]They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift.
11. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are immortal.
12. [ ] [ ] [ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13. [/] [ ] [x] [If male.] They are very muscular.
14. [/] [ ] [x ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (according to the story xD)
15. [] [ ] [ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc.
16. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc.
17. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. (genetic engeneering doesn't count)
18. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet.
19. [] [ ] [ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.
20. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are a healer.
21. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
22. [ ] [ ] [ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
23. [x] [ ] [x ] They have lost one/both of their parents.
24. [ ] [ ] [x ] They ran away from home.
25. [x ] [x ] [/ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
26. [ ] [ ] [x ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.
27. [ ] [ ] [ ]They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature.
28. [/] [ ] [ ] They never knew their parents.
29. [x] [ ] [ ]They were abused/spoiled as a child.
30. [ ] [ ] [ ]They are very attractive to the same gender.
31. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have lots of friends/no friends.
32. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are emo/cutesy.
33. [ ] [ ] [ ]They look much younger/older than they really are.
34. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are currently in a relationship.
35. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. (wut?)
36. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have a mental disorder.
37. [/] [/ ] [/ ]They have an emotional disorder. (do nightmares count??)
38. [ ] [ ] [ ] They struggle to stay sane.
39. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are a psycho.
40. [] [ ] [ ] They have multiple personalities.
41. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are very intelligent.
42. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have hallucinations.
43. [ ] [ ] [ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
44. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
45. [] [ ] [ ] They have a guardian spirit.
46. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
47. [ ] [ ] [ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
48. [] [ ] [ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.
49. [] [ ] [ ] Some part of their body glows.
50. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have a rare/unusual name.
51. [ ] [ ] [ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
52. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age.
53. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are connected with a certain element.
54. [x ] [x ] [x ] They are connected with a certain animal. (well, yeah, artificially mutated with animal genes bla bla xD)
55. [ ] [ ] [ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
56. [ ] [ ] [ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga.
57. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated/against/misunderstood.
58. [x ] [x ] [x ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared.
59. [ ] [ ] [ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives.
60. [x ] [x ] [x ] They are hiding from someone/something. (its more complicated that just "hiding" but okay...)
61. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have a rare blood type.
62. [ ] [ ] [ ] They cry blood.
63. [ ] [ ] [ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc. make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown.
64. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are from a different country to where they live (haven't exactly decided yet... So-so)
65. [ ] [ ] [x ]They are very mysterious/dark.
66. [x ] [ ] [ ]They are very lively/happy.
67. [ ] [x ] [ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
68. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are very patient.
69. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are from a long line of assassins.
70. [ ] [x ] [ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear.
71. [ ] [ ] [ ]They have amnesia.
72. [ ] [ ] [ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them.
73. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
74. [ ] [ ] [ ]  They are 'the chosen one'.
75. [x ] [ ] [ ] They have insomnia.

Archie total: 11
kate total: 6.5
Casey total: 10

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Point Reduction ::
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements ::

1. [ ] [ ] [ ]They smoke.
2. [ ] [ ] [ x] They are an alcoholic.
3. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are overweight.
4. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are addicted to drugs.
5. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have a short temper.
6. [ ] [ ] [ ] They enjoy bullying others.
7. [ ] [ ] [ ] They do not care much about others.
8. [ ] [ ] [ ] They are relatively emotionless.
9. [ ] [ ] [ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.

Total:  c 1


RESULT : 
Archie: 11
kate: 6.5
Casey: 9


05 :: Anti-Sue.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.


06-15 :: Balanced Character.
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though. 
(YESSSSSSS AL ARE HERE!!! :D)

16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue.
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.


26 :: Mary-Sue.
Please revise your character... NOW
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